Pedagogical Review of index.md

Define Clear Learning Objectives

• Introduce a brief list of learning objectives at the beginning of the page using action-oriented verbs (e.g. describe, implement, compare).
• Ensure the objectives are aligned with Bloom's Taxonomy, and build up and reflect both conceptual understanding and practical application.

Improve Instructional Design and Structure

• Follow a coherent instructional design model such as ADDIE or Backwards Design. For example
  • Begin with foundational concepts (What is MPI?)
  • Progress to syntax and differences in Fortran
  • Follow with practical code examples
  • End with a summary, next steps, or further exercises
• Ensure each section supports the achievement of the stated objectives.
  In its current form it sort of reads like documentation rather than an actual lesson on MPI?

Reduce Cognitive Load

• Break large blocks of code or explanation into smaller, more manageable units.
• Insert explanations between code blocks to support gradual comprehension.
• Minimise the use of jargon or provide definitions and context for unfamiliar terms.
  I think the place where this is particularly evident is within the first code block that is given. I understand the desire for a runnable Hello World example, but it feels like it jumps into a very big code block. too quickly

Incorporate Inclusive and Accessible Design

• Add visual aids (e.g. diagrams or illustrations of MPI process flow) to support multiple learning styles.

Introduce Formative Assessment

• Add short reflective or diagnostic questions throughout the text to reinforce learning.
  • Example: "What is the role of MPI_COMM_WORLD in both the Fortran and C versions?"
• Depending on what you are using, there are lots of packages that provide interactive quizzes, such as JupyterQuiz, but other packages that create GitHub Pages content also have it.

Encourage a Growth Mindset and Normalise Errors

• Share examples of common mistakes and how to debug them effectively.

Provide Real-World Context

• Briefly explain how MPI is used in practical scientific or industrial applications? I think its always handy to have some context for where they are going with the content and the justification for being able to use it.